Otis is a hardcore man. He believes in torture and pain, and the death and murder of others. He delights in torment and torture, revealing in blood and slaughter. He is a fighter, brutal and straight forwards but he is not above lies and deceit to get his way and what he wants. He is evil, plain and simple, and has a personal vendetta against dragons and the gods for creating such horrible creatures.
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Stonenheimer, Otis Jashorn
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Male
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born a,Draconian
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OTISis, Six feet and seven inches tall.
no place like home[/color]:;[/b][/size]
Germany
getting lucky with ~someone~[/color]:;[/b][/size]
Homosexual
babies coming?[/color]:;[/b][/size]
MARRIED? N
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Otis carries a long sword, like medieval knights but it is made to be more light weight and sharper upon the tip so that it can stab and pierce as well as slash and crush
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Otis wears a modified version of plate mail like medieval knights, but instead of the bulky versions they wore his is much more lean and slim. The metal fits against his form almost tightly and conforms to his body style. It does not hinder his ability to move with the style of overlaid metal especially at the joints however he does have issues with stamina. Not that it matters to much, as he is almost always seen upon his dragon.
Otis was born to a normal family, nothing out of the ordinary. He grew up, went to school but was always getting in trouble of ditching. He was caught multiple times ditching to torture and kill animals like cats and dogs. His parents simply thought that he was working out aggression towards unknown people at school and left the boy to his devices. The boy grew up, becoming a bully at school and continuing his reign of terror, but instead of small animals, the targets became smaller children. He eventually managed to graduate with lousy grades then quickly went out in to the world. He worked in several factories, doing heavy labor before one day he came home. His family was happy to see him, slavering with love and presents and good cooking. It was a marvelous time, before they all went to bed. That night, his world burned down around his eyes. Literally….an enormous black dragon attacked their town, burning it to the ground. Otis and his parents managed to escape his burning house, running from the town before the dragon swooped down, ripping his father to shreds and carrying his mother off screaming in to the night.
Otis that night swore vengeance upon dragons, and the gods that allowed them to exist. He apprenticed himself to a swordsman. He learned the art of wielding a sword, of the more ancient kind like broadswords and long swords. He excelled with long swords specifically, and quickly was moved from apprentice to master. As a gift, he was given a sword for his hard work. Then the male used his own money and ordered an armor set for him, custom made. Then… a group of mysterious dark magi that were looking for a special man who could talk to dragons contacted them, and asked him to do their bidding, who would help them remove the gods from power, and that they had a dragon twisted to their will to give to him if he accepted. What better way to exact his revenge that by using the very thing he hated to perform it? He accepted happily and began his life as a draconian with the intent of using his dragon to gather information and power before wiping all dragons off the face of the earth, starting with the twisted maniacal dragon Trafalgor.
Trafalgor is a sick, twisted dragon. Created through pain and agony, twisted in to hating everybody and everything. He loves whole sale destruction and chaos and would gladly scorch the face of the planet clear of anything with his flames, laughing all the while leaving it clear for his race to take over. He listens to Otis only because he thinks the man is just as twisted as he, and will help him move towards his goal.
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Trafalgor
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Trafalgoris 38 talland 127 long with awingspanof 150.
no place like home[/color]:;[/b][/size]
Romania
getting lucky with ~someone~[/color]:;[/b][/size]
Bisexual
babies coming?[/color]:;[/b][/size]
MARRIED? N
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Innate: Fire Breath (Saving rest of points)
disposition to the law
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CHAOTIC
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Smell of Sizzling flesh
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Burning towns
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Raw flesh
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Screams
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Pain
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Everything
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Dragons
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Killing everything
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Trafalgor never lived a normal life. Hatching from his egg late, and a runt of his group he was outcast and abused by his siblings. He quickly ran away as soon as he could. Trying to live upon his own, he struggled to find food but slowly managed to live. He learned to fly, and breathe his firey breath but found it to potent to hunt with. He concentrated upon hunting deer in the woods, swooping down on their backs to break their spines before feasting. Slowly he grew, and finally came in to his full size.
One day, relaxing in the sun the dragon heard several people approaching. He had been in this aread for a bit longer then he should have stayed, but the deer here where plentiful and the water cool and delicious with in his mouth. Lifting his head a sudden weight seemed to crush upon the stone he had been resting upon. He struggled, roaring in to the sky and spouting flames everywhere but the searing heat seemed to have no effect upon the people who approached. They chanted beneath their breaths, and suddenly Trafalgor knew no more.
He woke every now and then, always surrounded by the same people but in a completely different area. He was now in an underground cavern, chained upon the floor. Pain racked his body, the people casting spells upon him and torturing him. He knew not how much time passed, but another male eventually appeared. A young man, of this century full of hate and anger that always spoke of killing his kind. As the pain grew, Trafalgor came to blame everybody. People where doing this to him, as well as other more supernatural things. The gods where allowing this to happen! He had the chance to get free, and was leaping upon it whole heartily. Now, he would make THEM pay!
Varos has a very symmetrical look, giving her a strange, unearthly beauty. Her favorite form has grey eyes and red hair. She usually seems quite calm, with the shadow of a smile on her lips and a hint of a frown around her eyes.
Post by Varos Talantos on Jul 20, 2012 9:14:01 GMT -5
I am unsure as to whether or not this is permissible... I've been thinking about it since the day you put your application up but have made little headway. So, I'll post my points here and you can make your counter-points in reply and we'll see what happens, I guess.
1. Draconians aren't supposed to kill Dragons or they'll be found out about and their Dragon will betray them. 2. Dragons don't kill one another intentionally. 3. Draconians don't get further abilities without killing a Dragon.
It feels like you're trying to circumvent the disadvantages of Draconians (no abilities) while keeping the advantages (uh.... Dragon) when it comes down to it. I like the creativity, which is the only reason I haven't said no already, but it's a bit overpowering for your character to get away with. Can you think of some negative effects or something we can tack on to keep your character from being overpowered in it's current state? Or would you like to modify it? Or do you have some counter-points?
I feel the need to point out at least on the first point at least. His dragon is alright with the point he is at least attempting to kill dragons because the dragon himself is twisted and insane. The second point....anything will kill it's own kind if pushed in the right direction with enough force. The rest...I don't know about lol
Varos has a very symmetrical look, giving her a strange, unearthly beauty. Her favorite form has grey eyes and red hair. She usually seems quite calm, with the shadow of a smile on her lips and a hint of a frown around her eyes.
Post by Varos Talantos on Jul 20, 2012 11:40:46 GMT -5
Dragons are intensely loyal and do not fall under your presupposition that any creature will succumb and betray it's own kind with enough push. Think of it like that person in your life that you would die before you betrayed except it goes for the whole race... though, talking it out with you has made me realize I'm just completely opposed to a Dragon killing other Dragons intentionally.
Again, kudos on the creativity, I truly admire your work. However, the Dragon has to go if Otis is a Dragon Slayer. Let me know in reply here what you decide.
Well, Otis has yet to actually kill a dragon so he does not get powers and stuff which is why I didn't post any abilites under his section. Just Trafalgor gets abilities right now. Besides, I didn't spend any points on abilities yet anyways.
However, I can modify it so that Trafalgor does not know Otis is trying to hunt down dragons. If that will make it better.
Varos has a very symmetrical look, giving her a strange, unearthly beauty. Her favorite form has grey eyes and red hair. She usually seems quite calm, with the shadow of a smile on her lips and a hint of a frown around her eyes.
Post by Varos Talantos on Jul 21, 2012 4:24:42 GMT -5
I suppose... but Trafalgor can't kill other Dragons. They're unimaginably loyal and it really messes up the balance of things that I'm trying to maintain. I'm awfully sorry for cramping your creativity... it's actually very rare for such to happen. Never had anyone come up with this and I didn't think of posting it in the races section. Guess I've got some work to do.
Sorry for the inconvenience and hope to see your app accepted very soon.
Varos has a very symmetrical look, giving her a strange, unearthly beauty. Her favorite form has grey eyes and red hair. She usually seems quite calm, with the shadow of a smile on her lips and a hint of a frown around her eyes.
