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Aug 4, 2011 2:25:48 GMT -5
Post by Vladamir Aerion on Aug 4, 2011 2:25:48 GMT -5
Just wondered when my character I made would be looked at. The codes are like wild, I didn't get half of it. if i missed anything I'm sorry. I went back and fixed the things I saw off hand, but I'm only human and I did my best. I've rped for a while now, and just want to have some fun because it's been a while since I was able to rp.
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Worships Balance
Varos has a very symmetrical look, giving her a strange, unearthly beauty. Her favorite form has grey eyes and red hair. She usually seems quite calm, with the shadow of a smile on her lips and a hint of a frown around her eyes.
Grey Eyes
Red Hair
Height is 5'5
Well-balanced Build
Female
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Aug 4, 2011 4:10:03 GMT -5
Post by Varos Talantos on Aug 4, 2011 4:10:03 GMT -5
I understand sometimes things like that can be a bit confusing. I've gone over your application and I'll fix what I see, though you didn't tell me a few things. Their sexuality... hetero, homo, asexual, or maybe they refrain from sex entirely and have sworn a vow of silence?
Also, you didn't list five likes for Vladamir or his disposition to the law. Also, why does it say William Mooney? That part is for your character's full name, age, etc. There's no part in the application where it asks for you to tell us your information, name, etc. If you can get those things fixed and tidied up, we'd be good to go.
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